Tuesday, March 3, 2015

Positive Experiences


We had to use a given sentence starter and write about a positive experience we have had which was between 80 - 120 words.  We followed the writing process of planning, drafting, editing, proof-reading and publishing.   Check out Sam's experience below:



As a class we edited Sam's draft and this is our class effort.  Thank you Sam for allowing us to use your draft for our shared writing.


1 comment:

  1. Great story Sam and Room 7. The fishing experience sounded great.
    From Mrs Stevens

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